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Mommy, Mommy! I cried and cried, but no answer, our home was destroyed, everywhere lay them family. Relatives and friends, no one moved, no one wanted to play. They just lay there all the anointed in some kind of red water that tasted like food did. I shouted again, but still no response. The ground was black with soot and there was not one single living plant or blade of grass anywhere. There!, There she was. She lay on the ground near a cluster of my aunts under our favorite tree is now just a glowing piece of coal. She did not move, I walked carefully up to her, she's all red of the strange water, I gently poked at her and tried to wake her, she did not flinch, I was scared.
Well I'm trying to make a story for my character Rarsa. This is what I'v come up whit so far. Tell me what you think.

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